Awakenings
Chapter-27 — The One
By Lady Alchymia
Reviews
Tanydwr posted a comment on Sunday 20th July 2008 10:53am for Chapter-27 — The One
A wonderful story. I'd caught onto the fact that Harry was the son who Elizabeth brought death to, but I'd forgotten about monkshood poisoning Elizabeth!
I loved Harry's confusion over buying Hermione's present - "She definitely had a neck." Lovely, although possibly seen before.
And the last couple of lines were wonderful - just the right sort of humour.
Looking forward to the sequel.
Keep up the good work, you've got a great balance of humour and seriousness.
Lol, Tanydwr
Lady Alchymia replied:
Thanks very much indeed! I'm glad you enjoyed the story :).
Lady Alchymia
LJG posted a comment on Saturday 19th July 2008 7:38pm for Chapter-27 — The One
Excellent! Loved the first version, but this one is great as well! I've been waiting for the end scene for quite a few chapters, now and it was well worth the wait!
Looking foward to seeing the 2nd part, too. :)
Lady Alchymia replied:
Thank you so much! (And I'm delighted that you liked both versions :).)
Kind regards,
Lady Alchymia
Ken Warner posted a comment on Saturday 19th July 2008 3:32pm for Chapter-27 — The One
I had been waiting for them to figure it out -you had given us enough foreshadowing.
thanks for an excellent story and hours of great reading
warm regards
Lady Alchymia replied:
You're very welcome, Ken!
Thanks kindly,
Lady Alchymia
beauty01021 posted a comment on Saturday 19th July 2008 2:30pm for Chapter-27 — The One
great ending to the chapter.
Lady Alchymia replied:
Thanks kindly!
Lady A
SassyFrass posted a comment on Saturday 19th July 2008 12:15pm for Chapter-27 — The One
That was a great ending. I loved the part about The One knowing how to duck.
I hold out hope that it will become a Harry/Ginny pairing in the next story.
Good job with everything.
I love Frank.
Lady Alchymia replied:
Thank you very much! I really enjoyed writing Frank -- he always got to say exactly what he wanted to :).
Kindly,
Lady A
Meteoricshipyards posted a comment on Saturday 19th July 2008 10:21am for Chapter-27 — The One
Wonderful! Great story.
Rather abrupt ending. But I'll forgive you for the sequel.
Excellent work. You can be very proud.
Tom A.
Lady Alchymia replied:
Thanks kindly, Tom!
Lady Alchymia
Patches posted a comment on Saturday 19th July 2008 9:08am for Chapter-27 — The One
This is great. I am so thankful Hermione seems to say just the right things to Harry to trigger these moments of inspiration. I am so glad that Remus and Lizzie are released from the curse of that prophesey! That is great. I look forward to Psychomachia. Thanks for writing. pms
Lady Alchymia replied:
Thank you very much, Patches :). I've appreciated your feedback.
Lady A
Tumshie posted a comment on Saturday 19th July 2008 8:41am for Chapter-27 — The One
Thanks for writing your wonderful story, I am looking forward to reading your sequel
Lady Alchymia replied:
You're most welcome, Tumshie.
Thank you!
Lady A
kate19 posted a comment on Saturday 19th July 2008 8:10am for Chapter-27 — The One
the only thing i have to say is: PERFECT!!!!!
bye
Lady Alchymia replied:
Thank you very much, Kate!
Lady Alchymia
PadyandMoony posted a comment on Saturday 19th July 2008 7:34am for Chapter-27 — The One
I really enjoyed rereading this and hope to continue reading the sequel soon. Thanks for a wonderful story!
Lady Alchymia replied:
You're very welcome!!
Thanks kindly,
Lady Alchymia
drkjester posted a comment on Sunday 20th July 2008 12:19pm for Chapter-27 — The One
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