Awakenings
Chapter 14 — Mercurial Waters
By Lady Alchymia
Reviews
morriganscrow posted a comment on Tuesday 26th February 2008 12:37am for Chapter 14 — Mercurial Waters
What a bloody mess! Poor Harry!
At least Cho didn't throw up or faint, so I guess she's not so bad.....
Lady Alchymia replied:
Poor Harry, indeed!! Cho is certainly being tested in this terrible mess.
Cheers,
Lady A
beauty01021 posted a comment on Monday 25th February 2008 7:18am for Chapter 14 — Mercurial Waters
yeah great chapter can't wait for more so please update agian and soon.
Lady Alchymia replied:
Thanks very much.
Corinne posted a comment on Saturday 23rd February 2008 7:27pm for Chapter 14 — Mercurial Waters
I really like how you are going over this story again I like both versions,but I must admit this one seems a bit more clearer not so over run and I am certianly lookign forward to reading more along with the sequel keep up the good work
Lady Alchymia replied:
Hi Corinne,
I appreciate the vote of confidence, thank you very much!!!
Lady A
Aelita posted a comment on Saturday 23rd February 2008 10:53am for Chapter 14 — Mercurial Waters
WOW! This chapter was really good, I liked how Harry actually didn't want some of the girls there but the misinterpreted! I thought that was funny, though I am not sure you meant it to be! Please post again as soon as possible, this story is awesome!
Lady Alchymia replied:
Thank you very much, Aelita! I'm glad you found those bits amusing :).
Cheers,
Lady A
DrT posted a comment on Saturday 23rd February 2008 6:15am for Chapter 14 — Mercurial Waters
I'm sure the hospital section will be cut down considerably; going well so far!
Lady Alchymia replied:
Thanks, Dr T!
Yes, there have been (and will be) plenty of hospital cuts, but it still feels too long to me. Ah well, I keep needing to tell myself that that's just were the action is right now.
Lady Alchymia
Madelasha posted a comment on Friday 22nd February 2008 11:27pm for Chapter 14 — Mercurial Waters
Ghaaa! Perfect! I really liked how everybody misunderstood what Harry was trying to say, or what he wanted. Very funny :D
And now, besides wanting to kill Snape, I'm not so thrilled about Dumbledore either!!
Poor Remy feeling all guilty ;_;
Great chapter!
*Alex*
Lady Alchymia replied:
Thanks, Alex!
Poor Harry really is having trouble making himself understood. (He is really craving a pair of Extendble Lips right now!) I'm pleased you want answers from Snape and Dumbledore; they certainly have some explaining to do!
Poor Remy, indeed! His head (and heart) is all over the place right now.
Cheers,
Lady A
PadyandMoony posted a comment on Friday 22nd February 2008 6:08pm for Chapter 14 — Mercurial Waters
Great chapter. I have to confess, I don't remember all the details of the hospital stay, especially the part with Harry in the bath. I remember more of what happens later when he interacts more. I love the part when he is just out of the waters and he complains about the girls. And when he tries to talk to Remus about Elizabeth, so I dearly hope none of that will be cut. But I do think this flowed well.
Just so you know, I did not receive fanficauthors alert. Just the one from the Yahoo! group.
Lady Alchymia replied:
Not remembering V1 is a good thing LoL. And the things you mentioned are nice and safe :).
And thanks about the alert ... I forgot to send out an update alert, sorry.
Cheers,
Lady A
Wonderbee31 posted a comment on Friday 22nd February 2008 5:31pm for Chapter 14 — Mercurial Waters
Great part here again, and really enjoying Harry's bouts of embarrasment while in the waters, as well as the others trying to figure out how to do right by him.
Lady Alchymia replied:
Thank you! It does seem easy to forget the priorities of the patient in the healing equation sometimes, but, yes, they're all trying very hard to do right by him.
Cheers!
Lady A
TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Wednesday 18th February 2009 8:37am for Chapter 14 — Mercurial Waters
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